Chapter Discussion

Yeah... Maybe it could have the princess writing the letter, and then giving it to a flying type so that it could deliver it to us?

Or maybe we could already have the letter and it could start with us just finishing reading it...

I dunno?

I think the princess sending the letter sounds like a good idea~ Like

The lone Ninetales set down her quill/pen and nosed the sheet of curled parchment under the door that barred her from the outside world.
"Be swift," she whispered to the ____ outside.
The bird Pokémon took to the air, parchment in its grasp.....

dot, dot, dot...

Something like that maybe? But better of course.

I don't thinks it gets any better than that. 8P

I think you should definitely write that part.

Oh, and when we're writing, do we have control of every ones characters? We just don't change their personalities too much~

Yeah, we can all "control" each other's characters when we're writing about them.

But we post it from our characters point of view.

Of course~

[slash]Wosprig go write the prologue! 8D[/slash]

What else...

Ahhh!! Okay

One question, where's Res (that's her name right?) being held?

Well that didn't work... DX

Oh well, I'm sure it will be amazing~ =)

What order should we post in? I'll go last~ XD

Oh wait, she's by Lake Acuity right?

Wosprig wrote:Oh wait, she's by Lake Acuity right?

Who? :/ -shot-

I think the Princess is past Snowpoint City, and we're in Lake Verity? -goes to check-

The princess is near Lake Acuity

So we're at Lake Verity?
This is confusing.

I R Confuzzled... o.O

I thought the princess was with Luxord, who was keeping her locked up in her castle so she couldn't tell anyone about her evil plans?

Wasn't the castle near Lake Acuity?

OH!

I get it. XD Yes! You are correct~ =)

I'm really sorry...

I edited the prologue, I kinda forgot about the castle before.

When are you going to post it on the thread on PokéFarm?
I think it's good~

When we all think it's good and done.

Edit: Green, you know how we both do the size 9, coloured, century gothic/arial, centered text right? Maybe we should all do that for the FF and we could all do different colours.

Green = Limegreen
Wo = Dodgerblue
Star = Deeppink
Kawaii = something

Oh, I just saw your edit... /fail

I didn't notice that until just now.
xD

That would be Epic! 8D It'd be nice and color coordinated~ =)

Yeah, we should tell Kawaii

Pffft, I just realized a vital mistake on the first post of our FF. Can you find it?

It just goes to show how fail I am. XD

"Go from their destination Lake Verity"

Lol, it was the SANP thing that that one user found~ Ariadne or something? =)

I fixed~